Tuesday, March 27, 2007
Story: The Greatest Cartoon Writer Of All Time
This post is just the tip of the iceberg... see the bonus reason on our The Top Ten Reasons To Support The A-HAA for links to more great posts featuring animation art.

The other day, a discussion on cartoon writing erupted in response to recent posts on the subject in John Kricfalusi's blog. One of John's main points is that the golden age cartoons that we all regard as the greatest cartoons ever created were written by cartoonists as storyboards, not written in words as scripts. In support of his argument, he presented video clips of Walt Disney and Walter Lantz discussing the qualifications of the people who wrote their cartoons. (See also, Page 5 of the 1938 Disney Training Manual).

Who was your favorite golden age cartoon writer?
It's a fair question- one that I've heard animators discuss and argue about on many occasions. Surely current cartoon writers would have golden age writer heros, just like animators study golden age animators like Milt Kahl or Grim Natwick...

Disney story man, Joe Rinaldi
But none of the scriptwriters participating in the discussion could name a single golden age cartoon writer. The only names they could mention were other current scriptwriters, or novelists, journalists and live action screenwriters who worked in totally different media. They had no idea who pioneered their profession and the process these people used to create cartoons for nearly half a century. To be fair, this sort of ignorance of the history of our craft isn't just limited to writers. I've heard the same sort of admissions of ignorance from producers and directors, as well as artists and animators.
I'm preparing a post on the process used to develop stories for cartoons in the 30s and 40s, but in the meantime, here is an example of a story by my favorite golden age story man... Warren Foster.

After Clampett's departure from the studio, he wrote for McKimson ("Gorilla My Dreams", "Easter Yeggs", "The Foghorn Legorn") and Freleng ("Ballot Box Bunny", "Bugs And Thugs", "Birds Anonymous"). Freleng said that Foster was the best story man he ever worked with. In the TV era, Foster wrote episodes of Huckleberry Hound, Yogi Bear, Quick Draw McGraw, The Jetsons and The Flintstones.
Here is a storyboard by Foster from his days at Hanna-Barbera. This is a model of clarity and simplicity, designed to meet the stringent economics imposed on TV animation at the time. This is a board from the pilot episode of The Yogi Bear Show.















WHAT ABOUT ADVENTURE SHOWS
AND COMIC STRIPS?
In his article, "Detour Guide For An Armchair Marco Polo", master comic strip storyteller, Milton Caniff writes...
There has been a tendency recently for artists to automatically assume they cannot write their own stories because they see so many double by-lines. I contend that any man who can invent pictures can invent situations and dialogue. In fact, it should be easier for the artist to pilot his own action because he is not likely to write himself into one of those undrawable dilemmas in manuscripts about which illustrators have complained for years. --Milton CaniffSound familiar?
If you found this post to be interesting, see also... Ren & Stimpy: Big House Blues Part One, Part Two and Part Three / The Alvin Show: The Whistler Storyboard / Chad's Design For Television / Ren & Stimpy: Stimpy's Invention Part One and Part Two / Charlie McElmurry's Year Of The Tiger Storyboard.
Thanks
Stephen Worth
Director
ASIFA-Hollywood
Animation Archive
Labels: cartoonist, cartoons, storyboard, warren foster, writing, yogi bear





























15 Comments:
Great Material!
It's so easily and fast read compared to most new over-complicated storyboards and scripts.
p.s. Page 5 seems to have been replaced with page 10.
-david
Thanks for the heads up. I'll fix page 5 tomorrow.
Steve
Steve: I must to say to you that moves much to me to watch backwards and to verify that the great teachers did not need more tools than a pencil and a paper
"But, sir - I am a Gov'mint protected bear and I am not to be molested!"
I LOVE these. They make me want to write and board stories of my own.
I don't think I'd cut it as an actual animator - but I'd sure like to storyboard.
I've been watching a lot of Yogi lately via my Huckleberry Hound DVDs - I can't get enough of 'em.
I walk around all day quoting Yogi.
"Check it out, Boob! It's one o' those turkey-type birds!"
- Corbett
These are great. They are so easy to read. I found myself making all the voices for the characters in my head as I read them. I genuinely laughed too. Great evidence for the superiority of the old way. Too often the old ways are dismissed for the new only because they are old. There is no logical reason to not do things this way today.
Why can't you just present this wonderful board without editorializing against them ignorant writers?
Your characterization of the writers "who didn't know any classic writers" is a bit one sided. Just because writers don't want to engage in that endless debate that you never seem to grow weary of, doesn't mean they don't have respect for the past.
As a dues paying member of ASIFA, I think you should be careful not to push people away who would benefit from what you do.
The goal of this project is to tell the story of the history of animation through the lives of the people who pioneered the artform. We also intend to strive to raise the quality of all aspects of current animation by building upon the lessons of the past and "seeing further by standing on the shoulders of giants".
The fact that many professionals in all job classifications in the animation business are ignorant of the history of their own medium is particularly pertinent to the goals of the ASIFA-Hollywood Animation Archive, and addressing this problem has been a part of the project from the very beginning. For more info, see the article, Why Do We Need An Animation Archive.
We see the history of animation as a living, breathing thing that directly relates to and informs what we all do in our own work. If you have a suggestion on how to better accomplish these goals, feel free to pitch in and help out in your own way.
Thanks
Steve
Lordy do I have disdain for the anonymous.
I might not agree with you, but at least you put yourself in front of the speeding truck that is your opinion.
I posted this at Http://animationwriters.blogspot.com because I think it's an awesome example of what really works...
...and I left your comments in there because I believe in not editing out your context.
- Steve
Wow! Thanks very much for posting this Steve! Warren Foster wrote some of my favorite cartoons and it is an amazing opportunity to get to study some of his boards.
My girlfriend recently bought me a Bugs Bunny storybook from the early 50's she found in a flea market and I was surprised to find it was written by two of my favorite golden age cartoon writers Tedd Pierce and Warren Foster! On top of that it was illustrated by Bob McKimson! It has a guest appearance by Duck Twacy!
I can't tell for sure, so I'll ask...
These are "Warren's story boards" and I see a photo of him (I presume) tacking a drawing to a story board...
Did Warren Foster draw these story boards? They look great and clearly get every across story point and gag!
Another question:
If the big advantage of story boards is the ability to pull down, replace and re-arrange drawings, why are these boards laid out with multiple panels per page? Is the whole page re-drawn if something is changed, or do you just "X" out something (like on the John K boards previously posted?)
Thanks in advance, and, as always, keep up the good work!
I know I am sure glad to find out more animation hisotry , before blogs and online stuff like this the information came from whatever book you could be lucky enough to get your hands on. I am getting my education in animation history now, thanks to great sites like this and John Ks, efforts.
Thank you
To Craig D...
Warren Foster drew. Until 1960, all cartoon stories were written in drawings, not words.
I've always wondered why the H-B boards were all on a page like that. At Spumco, we always drew the panels separately and pinned them up on a cork board. When the board was approved, we would tape the panels onto the "three a sheet" forms.
I suspect that Foster thumbnailed this board on separate sheets and pinned them up. When he was happy with it, he probably tightened up the drawings by redrawing them onto the "six a sheet" format.
Thanks
Steve
That nails it, Steve. Thanks, in return!
Craig D.
Thanks, Steve, this is great!
Do you have this cartoon as a finished movie? It would be interesting to compare. - How much was changed/added? - This board would go through layout and direction where the action would be fleshed out.
I'm not a historian and I make no claim to original research. Did non-artist writers contribute to the Golden Age of Animation? I don't know. I doubt they contributed much, but who knows? Some of the early Disney features like "Lady and the Tramp" and some of the later ones like "Aristocrats" feel written, whether they were or not. The features that feel this way are usually my least favorites.
On the subject of whether writers SHOULD write cartoons I feel on more secure ground. In a general way, no, they shouldn't. Few if any cartoonists can draw everything equally well. To get the best results on the screen A director has to skewer his stories to fit his own enthusiasms and the unique talents of the arists in his crew. My experience is that writers, left to their own devices, can't be bothered to do this. There are exceptions maybe, but that's the rule.
There can't be very many writers who really undersatand the nuts and bolts of cartoons. It's hard to imagine a writer consistently leaving time for interesting walks to music, or a flourishes in the way a character eats his soup. Writers usually overwrite their stories so there's no room for visual gags, except the very shortest and most superficial.
Animation writers can not or will not write scripts to length. That defect has a huge negative consequence for the shows they work on. In an effort to trim down the stories to fit the screen time all the good visuals gags are lost.
I don't think writers overwrite because of zeal, they do it because it's actually faster to write that way, without editing. Writing a good, short cartoon to the proper length is actually time consumming and most writers aren't willing to put aside lucrative freelance in order to do it. When it comes right down to it, they don't really feel much loyalty to the industry they've come to dominate.
There's lots more to say about this, a whole lot more, but that'll do for a start.
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